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"ek kam keha c tuhanu tusi o b nai kar sakey "gussey ch cheekhda hoyea o banda kanchan nu ghurda hoyea bolea
"mein ki kar sakdi c ... dr. sehgal b attend kar rahey c . meri duty day ch c ..jad hun rat nu death ho gayi tan unha ney dead declare kar dita "dari hoyi kambdi kanchan us wal vekhdi boli"menu b thori der pehlan e phone aya a k tusi mar chukkey o "
"mein tuhanu keha c na menu dead declare nai karna " gussey ch lal akhan nal ghurda o banda kanchan wal vekhda bolea"ventilator tey lagey rehen dindey"
"es ton pehlan mein kuch kardi ..sarian formalities dr. sehgal ney purian kar ditian death certificate dean .. tuhanu tan pta e hona sada hospital ek reputed hospital hai tey asin kisi nu dhokey ch nai rakhdey "dari hoyi kanchan apney wallon safai dindi boli "meinu aap tuhadi death da vohat dukh a mein tuhanu bacha na saki.."
"hmmmmm.." kuch der chup riha o banda fer bolea "tuhanu pta hun mere sansakar ho jana tey menu es duniya ton jana paina mere sab kam adhurey ..."
kuch na boli kanchan andar dil nu sah aya k sanskar ton bad o usnu tang tan nai karega ja fer usdey samney tan nai avega...
"ek kam karo tusi hun mansi nu phone karo " kuch der beitha o banda sochda riha fer bolea
"mansi kaun ?? "thori hairan ho kanchan us wal vekhdi boli
ohi jis di pic mere vellet ch hai tey number pichey likhia hai " kanchan nu apney vellet di yad dilanda o banda bolea "meri wife a "
"ohhhhhhhh"ek dum uth k ek passey paye us bandey dey baig nu chuk usdey vellet vichon pic kad vekhdi hoyi kanchan boli"tuhadi wife da naam mansi hai "
"haan usda naam mansi hai tey mera deepak ..deepak sharma " pehli bar kanchan nu pta lga k os bandey da naam deepak sharma a .. kuch pal us wal vekhdi rahi yakeen nai ho riha c usnu k jehra banda thori der pehlan hospital ch mar chuka hai o usnal usdey samney beitha gallan kar riha
"mein DM softech da CEO cum managing director haan ..mera matlab c " mur kanchan dey kanna ch us bandey di awaz sunyai diti
"naam tan kafi suneya hoyea c usney DM Softech da .. apna phone kad pic dey pichey likhia number milan lagi
"phone nai chuk rahi " 3/4 bar try kran ton bad thori nirash hoyi kanchan deepak wal vekhdi boli
"gayi honi amit chawley kol .."nafrat jehi najar nal phone wal vekhda deepak bolea "koi na call back jarur karugi jad free hoyi...tusi usdey phone di wait karo .."
"ji .."mud ek bar number milandi hoyi kanchan ney keha es bar b nai chukea phone kisi ney ...
"tuhanu pta tuhadi es galti karkey mere sarey kam adhurey reh janey .. meri death ton bad hun na tan menu koi vekh sakega na e meri koi awaz sun sakega " kanchan wal vekhdey hoye nirash hoye deepak ney keha ..jad tak tusi menu vetilator tey rakhea c mere jism ch chahey nakli sah par chal rahey c par hun menu dead declare kar tusi mere oh sah b rok ditey "
"par par mein tuhanu vekh rahi haan tey sun b rahi haan " hairan hoyi kanchan deepak wal vekhdi boli
"haan bas hun tusi e menu vekh sakdey o tey sun ssakdey o...hor koi nai o b uni der jini der merian last rites nai ho jandian meri atma layi rakhey hoye path da bhog nai pai janda uston bad nai " kanchan wal vekhdey hoye deepu mayous hunda bolea "fer mein es duniya ton challey jana "
"ohhhhhhhh.."ghabrayi pareshan hoyi kanchan nu kuch samaj nai ayi ki keh riha deepak ..galti tan uston b shayd hoyi c ..j o us velley hospital hundi tan shayad dr. sehgal nu ventilator lahan na dindi tey usnu dead declare na kran dindi...
achanak phone di ring baji kahcna dey nal nal deepak b phone wal vekhan lga
"mansi da phone a "phone tey number vekh kanchan deepak nu dasdi boli
"karo gal .." uth k kanchan kol aa beithda deepak bolea dar e gayi kanchan deepak nu apney kol beitha vekh fer b himmat karkey phone on kita
"hellow es number ton miss calls ayi c " udron mansi di awaz ayi
"ji mein "XXXX" hospital ton dr. kanchan bol rahi haan "himmat kar kanchan ney jawab dita
"yes .."udron phone tey phir mansi di awaz ayi
"ji tuhadey husband mr. deepak sharma kal dey sadey hospital ch admit c unha nu heart strock aya c tey aj thori der pehlan e unha di death ho gayi "badi himmat kar kanchan ton eh phone tey keh hoyea
"waaaaaaaaatttttttttttttttttttttttt.." udron mansi di phone tey uchi cheekh usnu sunayi diti
"ji.....sadey kol unha di koi information nai c ..es layi tuhanu inform nai kar sakey " mansi di cheekh sun badi muskil nal kanchan ton ena keh hoyea
koi jawab nai aya phone tey hairan hoyi kanchan kadi phone wal tey kadi kol beithey deepak wal vekhdi
"ji asin huney e hospital puj rahey haan "phone tey kisi gents di awaz ayi
"keha c na amit chawley kol honi a..usi di awaz c " phone tey amit di awaz sun deepak gussey tey nafrat nal phone wal vekhda bolea...
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jiven e ambulance aa k usdey ghar agey ruki .. sab da ro ro k bura hall c puri kothi pura ghar lokan nal bharea pya c ..kisi nu yakeen nai ho riha c eni choti umar ch deepu heart attack nal..... har koi dukhi ena changa munda aj es duniya ch nai c ... rab dey es khed nu vekh har koi usdey pariwar dey dukh nu sanjha kran k kosis karda apney wallon hausla dey riha c ..
usdi maa ufff dil andar tak kamb uthea deepak da apni maa nu cheekhan mar mar chatti pit pit rondi hoyi vekh .. tey peo usda gumsum bina kuch boley rab dey es bhanney nu samaj nai pa riha c ... dona di halat vekh deepak da dil kita unha kol ja k unha nu chup karwa wey par kidan.. hun tan o es duniya ch e nahi riha c sab usdi di maut da e tan dukh mna rahey c sarey..chah k o kuch nai kar sakda c bas usdi atma apni maa nu rondey tadafdey vekh sakdi c kar kuch b nai sakdi c..o tan fer b apney maa peo nu edan rondey tadfadey vekh sakda c par usdey maa peo tan usnu vekh e nai sakdey c..usdi maan tan bas ambulance ton bahar nikalan wali usdi laash nu akhan fad fad vekhdey hoye kadi behosh ho jandi jad b hosh andi fer rondi hoyi kadi aasman wal vekhdi kadi us ambulance wal jis ch usdey jwan mundey di laash c ..na vekh sakea apni maa di eh halat bhaj k us kol gya ....
"ma ma ro na ... pls vekh mein tere kol e tan haan " maa dey modey tey hath rakh usnu sambhalan di kosis karda bolea par koi asar nai c maa tey hunda b kidan na tan usdi maa usnu vekh sakdi c na e sun sakdi c ..apni maa di halat vekh kuch pal layi tan o bhul e gya c k o tan mar chuka a ..apni es majboori da ehsaas hundey e bebas hoyea edar udar vekhan lga ...andar uthi tees tey apni maa dean akhan dey hanju usdi atma nu tadfan lagey.. jad usdi najar apney peo tey payi ..hauka e nikal gya usda ..gumsum khada ambulance wal vekhda hoyea har koi uskol khada usnu hausla den di kosis kar riha c par kehra hausla hun us peo nu sambh sakda c jisdey samney usdey jwan putt di lassh c .. akhan pathar ho gayean... hanju suk gaye dil tan kar riha c uchi jehi cheekh mar k ro pavey usda peo par apni vohti nu ronda tadfda vekh apney aap tey kabu kar duniya di es kaudi sachai nu bardhasht kran di kosis karda kadi ambulance wal vekhda kadi aasman wal shayd rab ton puch riha c rabba eh tun kehrey janam da badla lya mere ton ...
apni maa kol khada bebas hoyea deepak apni es majboori tey tadaf uthea aj tak kadi b usney apni pyari maa dean akhan ch hanju nai aan ditey c tey aj usdi maa ro ro pagal hoyi usnu awaz maar rahi c ..chah k b usnu chup na karwa sakea usdey hanju nai punj pa riha c .. aj usnu ehsaas ho riha c maran ton bad lok lassh nu vekh rondey tey dukhi tan hundey ney par us lassh vichon nikli ruh es sab vekh tan sakdi a par na tan kisi nu haulsa dey sakdi a na e unha dey hanju punj unha nu chup karwa sakdi a ... tadfda hoyea assman wal vekhda bol uthea "hey rabba ek pal layi menu meri jindgi wapas dey dey mein apni maa nu samja sakan sambh sakan usdey hanju punj sakan...par kithey ehi tan kudrat da dastoor a ...maran ton bad b ruh da edan apney sakey sambhdean nu rondey hoye vekh k tadfna...
bhaj k apney peo kol gya .. usdey modey tey hath rakh bolea "bapuji haulsa rakho haulsa rakho...hun tusi e es dukhan dey pahad nu sambhna a ....."par na tan usdi awaz usdey peo dey knna ch payi na e modey tey rakhey usdey hath da bapu nu koi ehsaas hoyea ..."
"ogoddddddd"apni bebasi ch pagal hoyea deepak ambulance wal vekhan lga shayd dr. kanchan nal ayi hovey ek ohi tan c jehri usdi awaz sun sakdi c tey usnu vekeh sakdi c . amunbulance vichon apni laash nu kad dey hoye vekh deepak dean akhan kanchan nu labhan lagea kachan tan nai par usnu mansi najar ayi
ahhhhhhhh nikal gayi usdey munh vichon jad usney chittey suit tey chitti chunni ch rondi hoyi haukey lendi mansi nu ambulance ton utardi vekhea..usdey chehrey tey aya dard vekh usdi ruh mud ek bar maran wali ho gayi usda pyar usdi jaan usda sab kuch kidan haukey hichkian lay lay ro rahi c... usdean akhan vichon digdey hanju vekh sab kuch bhul gya .. koi gussa nai riha usdey dil ch mansi layi dil kita agey wadh usnu wahan ch ghut jaffi pa usnu hausla devey... par kol e khadey amit nu vekh usdey andar aag e lag gayi esi yaar ney tan yaar maar kiti usnal .. usdi gairhazri ch usdi vohti nu...
rondi hoyi apney hanju punjdi jad mansi usdey kollon di lagi agey ho usdey samney aa usnu samjan di kosis karda bolea " mansi pls pls ro na mein nai vekh sakda terian akhan ch hanju.." par usdi awaz ... na tan mansi dey kanna ch payi na e o ruki .. ek passey khadi apni naukrani kol aa mansi apney hanju punjdi boli" shanti ... dead body andar hall ch lay k aa rahey ney tun uthey bichaya hoyea o kaleen hta dey vohat costly hai .. nai tan dead body dey nal e sutna paina usnu ..."
"ogoddddddddddd eh dukh eh rona sab lok dikhawa hai ..." tadaf uthea apni mansi dey munh ton eh sun ... aj usnalo costly oh farsh tey bichaya hoyea kaleen ho gya ...nafrat nal bharea hoyea mansi tey usdey pichey pichey turdey amit wal vekhan lga
"hye mera puttt .."apni maa di uchi cheekh sun andar tak kamb gya deepak bhaj k mud maa kol pujea jehri apney putt di lash wall vekh cheekhan mardi rondi hoyi ek passey nu dig behosh ho gayi ...bhaj k lokan ney usdi maa nu sambhya apney hathan wal vekhdi hoye ro e payi deepak di ruh ufff apni maa nu b nai sambh sakda oh......

shamshaan ghat ch har koi usdean akhiri rasma ch shamil c ..par deepak tan bas ek passey kahdi apni rondi hoyi maa nu vekh riha c tey dujey passey chittah tey rakhi apni lash kol beithey apney peo nu apnian akhiri rasma kardey vekh riha c pathar wang hoyean apney bapuji dean akhan chup chap mantar pardey hoye apney puttar nu akhiri bidayi dey rehean c
"hye o rabba ruk ja deepu dey bapu na la aag mere putt nu ..hye o rabba roko koi deepu dey bapu nu .. hye oye sek laguga mere putt nu .."cheekh mar k rondi hoyi behosh ho gayi usdi maa jad usney apney gharwaley nu apney putt di chittah nu aag landey hoye vekhea ek bar gardan ghuma usdey peo ney usdi maa wal vekhea...laash nu agg la dhu dhu kardi chitta nu vekh cheekh uthea eh usdi pehli cheekh c apney putt di laash nu vekh.. godea bhar jameen tey beithda hoyea aaaasman wal vekhda bolea "ahhhh ki likhia rabba tun meri kismat ch apney putt di laash nu moda dena tey usdi chittah nu aag lani .. hye o rabba edan da naseeb kisi peo di kismat na likhin..." kehda ehnda uhci uchi ronda ek passey nu behosh ho dig pya
samaj nai aa rahi c ki karey deepak ek passey shamshaan ghat tey usdi maa behosh payi c tey dujey passey usda peo .. chah k o dono vichon kisi nu b na tan apnian wahan ch ghut sakda c na e hausla dey unha nu chup karwa sakda c ... najar usdi amit kol khadi apni vohti mansi tey payi...ruh usdi b cheekh uthi apni mansi dey munh ton eh sun "eh buda budi kuch jyada e natak nai kar rahey .................
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tuc oss maa peyo da dukh dikhaya jo na chaunde hoye v apne putt nu apne toh pehla tor de nee..kyn k hrek maa oeyo chaundaa vyi sadi lash nu moda sada putt dwee.. prr jd ohi putt ohna toh pehla tur jwee ta ohna lyi ess toh vdda dukh hor koi nii....smjh skde aa ihna de dil te ki beetdi hougii......oh chunde ch vyi sada putt sadi lash nu aag dwee prr hun ohi maa peyo apne putt di lash nu aag dengee...

aah din na rbb kise v maa peyo de jionde jee le k aawee....

duja nisha de behalf te tuc ohh aurt dikhayi aa jihnu sirf paisa te yaar chahidaa..eho jhi loka sahmne ta bht rondi aa vyi dkhn aala v khe ess toh vdd dukh kise nu ni honaa..prr eho jhi aurat 2 ya 3 dina ch apne asli rang ch aa jndi aa....

te end ch jo nisha ne keha vyi eh budha budhi kuj jyada e ni kr rhee.. eh sachayi khi aa tucc.....

speechlesss krtaa tucc... hje v hnjuu ne akhan ch....

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