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Update review tan edan likh riha jiven aap pta nayi kida wada writer
apnia adhurea storiyan purian kar fer kisi nu salah devin

oye tu avda kam kar.. tere toh tain ik page v pora nai hoya story da.. tu v suru kiti c.. bhul gya.. nai tain avdi profile khol ke vekh la.. kise kam joga hega.. ke bus har ik thread te bakbak karani aundi...

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deep veere tainu jive theek lgda tu apni story likh sade piche lgg k apni dil di gl nu ignore na krr...

tu v story start krn toh pehla sbb kuj sochya hona vyi story ch aa kuj likhnaa eda krnaa oh sbb krr....

love of drkness da suggestion vdiaa main chaunaa vyi ohda di story koi likhee prr tu sade piche lgg k ehh story nu chnge na krr..jive sochya c oda likhh..

eh story complete kr k frr second story strt kr lyii jo incest n romance howee...ya eda kr lyii ese story da second prt strt kr lyi jo sirf deep n meet de sex toh pehlaa jo ohna ne shuruaat kiti c pyar dii ohde base te howee........

kise piche lgg k apni story de lyi thinking na chnge krii..jo sochya hoya ohh likhh...sbb psnd krngee..

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deep veere tainu jive theek lgda tu apni story likh sade piche lgg k apni dil di gl nu ignore na krr...

tu v story start krn toh pehla sbb kuj sochya hona vyi story ch aa kuj likhnaa eda krnaa oh sbb krr....

love of drkness da suggestion vdiaa main chaunaa vyi ohda di story koi likhee prr tu sade piche lgg k ehh story nu chnge na krr..jive sochya c oda likhh..

eh story complete kr k frr second story strt kr lyii jo incest n romance howee...ya eda kr lyii ese story da second prt strt kr lyi jo sirf deep n meet de sex toh pehlaa jo ohna ne shuruaat kiti c pyar dii ohde base te howee........

kise piche lgg k apni story de lyi thinking na chnge krii..jo sochya hoya ohh likhh...sbb psnd krngee..

keep writinggg

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so ghaint super duper hit update aa bai

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jasmeet deep nu yaad krdi fuddi ragardi ragardi so gai....
kuj time baad deep ghar agya... te Jasmeet nu milan room ch aya te dekhya jas. Jasmeet suti pai c....
apni baha da sohna jeha chehra de ek dum deep de kadam ruk gye.... fr holli holli face de kol gya da te face te hath la bukhar dekhn a
laga.....
bukhar kuj teek c... Jasmeet nu sutti dekh deep apne room chal gya.....
dopehar hoi ta Manjeet Jasmeet de room ch i te Jasmeet nu jagdi dekh davai khan nu kaha.... Jasmeet uthi te davai lai bathroom ch chal gyi....
Ada hi krde kronde shaam pai gai sab ne roti khadi....
Jasmeet apne room ch aa gai.... te Manjeet te deep sair kran vhal gye......
jssmeet khus c k hun fr raat pai chali shyad ajj fr deep nal jaffi pa k son da moka mil jave...
deep de manjeet Jasmeet de room ch aye te deep bad te bath gya....
Manjeet ne Jasmeet da haal pushya "putt bukhar kida hun"
Jasmeet "hanji mamma theek e aa" thora dhilla jeha boli....
davai khala fr..
hanji mamma khali aa davai Jasmeet ne fata fat jawab dita....
deep ne ek dum Jasmeet wal face kita te bolea tusi kida khali davai apne aap..
Jasmeet "bukhar jada c ta kha khali bura haal c" Jasmeet ne sohna jeha face hor tara da kr leya ta jo deep ohnu fr raat wang pyar kre....
chalo theek aa tusi sojo main v ja k sova.. te khyal rakhi putt apni bhan da... hor na ah raat nu jada bimar hoje te tu sutta rahe....
as to pahla deep kuj kehda Jasmeet pahla hi bol pai... nai mamma deep ne raat bohat khyal rakhya mera.... tusi tension na lawo sojo ja k...
Jasmeet deep wal dekh muskurai.... te deep ne v smile kiti...
Manjeet apne room ch chal gai te Jasmeet tv Chanel change kran de bahane remote chukan gai ta deep de kol bath gai.... Jasmeet te deep de mode nal moda la tv dekhan lagi... deep ne keha "didi so jana c" Jasmeet ne keha deep nind ni ondi.... te nal hi apna sir deep mode te sir rakh k tv dekhan lagi.... deep v samj gya te ohne apne ek hath nal Jasmeet de muh te pyar nal hath ferea.....te bolea didi tusi theek hojana jaldi....
Jasmeet muskurai te sochan laggi jo menu theek ho k na milea oh bimar ho k mil gya as lai hun dil krda bimaar e raha... theek ho gai ta aa pyar kehne dena.....
fr ta sab apo apne room ch chal jana... mere nal kehne sona.... a soch Jasmeet ne lami pai apna sir deep de patta ch rakh k pai gai te deep batha reha dono jane gallan kran lagge...
deep nu v nind on lagi.... te deep ne Jasmeet nu keha k chal soea hun... pr Jasmeet nai c chohdi k oh apne pyar to valh hove..... as lai Jasmeet deep di gl nu ansuna kri jandi c chup kr k pai rahi..... deep v samj gya c Jasmeet kl raat di tara mere to vakh nai hona chohdi...
fr deep ne jo bol bole oh sun Jasmeet de dil di khusi da tikana na reha.... "didi chalo soea kl vang......" Jasmeet khus hogai....
fr Jasmeet sidi ho deep kol pai gai te deep v brush kr k Jasmeet kol aa k kapre utar k pai gya.... Jasmeet ne deep di bah te sir rakh jaffi pa k so gai....
Jasmeet deep de pait te hath feran laggi.... deep de pait te bane pack abs Jasmeet nu bohat vadia lagge.. ek dum lohe warga sareer......
Jasmeet deep de sareer nal jur k pai te apne dud deep de nal jor lye. te ek vakhri hi kushi ho rahi c Jasmeet nu..... ada hi krdi krdi jasmeet nu kafi time baad nind aa gai.... Jasmeet kafi raat deep nal ada suti rahi...
jad 12 k vaje ta Jasmeet nu kaag i te sochya oh deep di bah te sir rakh k suti pai aa... ada ta deep bah dukhan lag lag jani.... Jasmeet ne apna sir chuk k deep di bah side te kiti ta deep ne pasa le Jasmeet upar bah rakh lai te jaffi pa lai...
Jasmeet ne v bina time gavae deep nu jaffi pai te muskrondi hoi jaffi pa k deep di chati nal ada jur k so gai jida bacha apni maa nal jur k sonda...
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